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Always on My Mind by ~Dead-hunter:iconDead-hunter:





He walked into the room. His heart was filled with something unsettle. But He was happy. He looked across the ways to see her. She wore her hair in front of her face, with a small opening for her cigarette. She pulled her hair behind her ears and the moonlight glimmered on her tears. She lifted her hand and placed with her necklace. It had a small tag on it with the words puppy. His name for her. She was fragile and gentle, although she acted tough. The smallest thing would hurt her. Her real name? Christine.
"I guess I've been a bad pup havnt I?" she said, still facing the window of their apartment.
"stop crying. The tears are covering your face."
"I can't stop," she replied kind of smug. She grinned a little.
"Nothing will make me stop loving you. Your my pup. I would be a bad master if I let you go."
"I couldn't think, Max. It was so sudden." She turned around and looked into his eyes where she saw her reflection. Disgusted her looked away. "What happens now?"
"What do you mean?"

She sighed and then wiped her tears. Max could see she was trying to be strong. "You going to go and seek some revenge on me? Gonna do some coke lines? Drink up? Get head?"
"Of course. All the above." He smiled.
She smiled back.
He opened up his arms, "Come here."
Christine hesitated, not that she didn't want to rush into his warm arms, but that she felt nasty. She felt like she didn't desrve someone so loving.
"Come here. Closer."
She looked up into his eyes again, but this time her reflection was gone. She could see him. Only him. She could see his heart. She could see the spot where she bashed it in, but it healed up quickly. His eyes are so calm. She felt shaky from fear. In her eyes, he was a god and she was the human race, always screwing up and him always forgiving.
"Pup, come here."
She leaned over to the coffee table and smashed her cigarette in the ash tray. "You promise you won't let go?"
"I have to get a hold of you first."
"I don't want you to regret me. I'll die inside if you fell in love with someone else because of something I did to you."
"Pup, stop talking. Your thinking to much. I miss you. Come here."
Christine walked over to her maker and slipped into his arms. The hug became her shield and she suddenly felt like she could let her wall down. The tears rolled hard and her voice shaked and gasped for air.
Max closed his eyes. "And so it is..."
She shut hers and tears ran.
Max squeezed her tighter. "Just like you said it would be. Life goes easy on me. Most of the time."
She let go and walked over to the front door. "I'm not good enough for an angel like you"
"And so it is..."
"I love you so much."
"The shorter story"
"I can't stand hurting you"
"No love no glory"
"I need you so badly."
"No hero in her skies"
"I love you," she said and opened the door.

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"I can't take my eyes off of you"
She stopped. Her eyes red and pumping with tears. she gripped the door.

"I can't take my eyes off of you"

She turned around.

"I can't take my eyes off of you"

He looked in her eyes and she looked back. He finaly gave in. A tear rolled down his cheek.
"I can't take my eyes off of you"

She shut the door.

"I can't take my eyes off of you"

Christine walked over to him and held his hands. "fuck you for being so good to me."


"Hi puppy"
©2005-2009 ~Dead-hunter
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:iconfiramage:
Oh wow. A Deep piece. Those who truly love you will always forgive you no matter what happens.. Very well constructed.. Great Voice. Missed your work

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I am simply Nobody
A soul forever drifting in the darkness
Purely Heartless
:iconcatch-a-falling-star:
wow. thats love... reminds me somewhat of a relationship i have at the moment.. its odd. but then again, its wonderful. that pet name, its great. very unorginal. this whole piece is different, and i really like that. great work with this. i think that love should be this way.. some love is. your always forgiven, even if the pain is still there. i dunno.. im ramblin

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[Animal Bar]
:iconwolfrunner13:
damien rice...i like it

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-Oh, my baby, when you're older...-

I have :pride:, do you?
:iconxxaphroditesangelxx:
this piece makes me feel.. like I haven't felt.

it touches me in a way no other piece has touched me.

I want to cry and smile at the same time. It makes me feel lonely.. but listful of a past I've worked hard to forget.

although it's overused I'll say it-

beautiful

:+favlove:

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I'm a picker, I'm a grinner
I'm a lover and I'm a sinner
I play my music in the sun

I'm a joker, I'm a smoker
I'm a midnight toker
I sure dont want to hurt no one
:icondead-hunter:
its funny. Its making everyone feel how I wrote it to be. But the one I wrote it too and about, doesnt seem to care for it much. they just think its, "okay" and nothing more about it

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Its go-go not cry cry.
:iconxxaphroditesangelxx:
mmm.. quite a paradox..

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I'm a picker, I'm a grinner
I'm a lover and I'm a sinner
I play my music in the sun

I'm a joker, I'm a smoker
I'm a midnight toker
I sure dont want to hurt no one
:iconbilliechaz:
Hmm i'm working out a meaning in my head, a hiden truth....i dunno maybe my brain is in overdrive....hmm

very nice Doc, love it :).

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~dAaes
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t.A.T.u commeth
:iconfillegabrielle:
I love Damien Rice.
Great use of a beautiful song.

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You mean she would rather imagine herself relating to an absent person than build relationships with those around her?
:icondead-hunter:
its the only song that makes me cry. like the fucken pansy i am. :-)

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Its go-go not cry cry.

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